My first poin

[Mr. Lonely]

Heya Dudes .
I am living one of the hardest periods in my life , so I thought writing would help me throw this , and hear I present you my first poem about a girl whom I love but she cant feel me


Love is blind
Heart is blind
I am blind
I've choosed a source of another man's happiness
so I tryed to forget and get over it
but it kept renewing
and nothing made me beat it
she used to be my best friend
but my heart is her patient
so I hardly lived and struggled
* * *
But now I feel like am the worst man
I should feel that she is so sad
but am happy now that she is alone
it's something I deeply wished and it happened
so I felt like I've born again
and I sow a light in my heart and my brain
I saw an easy treasure to gain
and I thought my love will still remain
* * *
but I was trapped in a pure illution
that when I felt it was sudden
I was between two difficult choices
First: to examinate her feelings
Second: to live in this illution to a "happily ever after" or a dead end
so I choosed the first one
and then I got the worst result
I guess she dosent even know that am exist
even after she saying am her good freind
so happily ever after with her is impossiple to get
cos. now am between my dignity and my heart
and without dignity I am not exist

Hope you like it

[عاشقة النيل]

thank you man
ilike it so much

[darasta90]

way too gud bro, i like it keep it up n about that gurl u love... well i dunno wut to tell u but keep tryin hard & at the end im sure she will feel ur emotions for her... i can see it that u deeply fallin for her ha.. gud luck man

[ThEwWw]

my dude don't worry with days you will forget that

[...Pure As Snow...]

really empressing words
but what i`d say is
keep trying to the very end
if u get to no where then make sure u need no one
u`ll move on soon or later
everyone is ment to forget their pain one day
but chears for u, u have great words
i could feel your pain through them